Original practice card
Use one fixed example for a fair comparison.
Original line: “Sasha sees six silver signs beside the station.” Compare untouched A with a small angle-change B. Then place it in a paragraph: “The signs point toward the east entrance. Sasha checks the map and walks on.” Listen for sharpness and for any lost consonants in both sentences.
How should the first pass work?
Read the example and limits before starting, keep a baseline, and work through the six drills above. Make two takes with a recording device you control and note the specific change privately. On playback, check that information remains intact before judging expressive choices. Stop if uncomfortable; no audio upload is needed.