Original practice card
Use one fixed example for a fair comparison.
Imagine a clip with a three-second silent gap: Lena slides a blue envelope under a locked door, then walks away. Try “Lena slips a blue envelope under the door.” Compare it with “Lena secretly betrays her friend.” The second line invents a motive the pictured action cannot establish.
How should the first pass work?
Read the example and limits before starting, keep a baseline, and work through the six drills above. Make two takes with a recording device you control and note the specific change privately. On playback, check that information remains intact before judging expressive choices. Stop if uncomfortable; no audio upload is needed.