Original practice card
Use one fixed example for a fair comparison.
“Every night, the lighthouse sends one signal. Tonight, someone answers from the empty sea. Mara has until dawn to find the sender.” Mark the first sentence as the premise, “Tonight” as the turn, and the final deadline as the reveal. Record a neutral cut and an urgent cut at a comfortable level.
How should the first pass work?
Read the example and limits before starting, keep a baseline, and work through the six drills above. Make two takes with a recording device you control and note the specific change privately. On playback, check that information remains intact before judging expressive choices. Stop if uncomfortable; no audio upload is needed.