Original practice card
Use one fixed example for a fair comparison.
Original scene: “I found the key. … Under the stairs? No, I was at the gate. … Wait—there are two keys? … Then I will bring both.” Private partner notes: asks about stairs; explains two matching keys; requests both. Change the pauses according to those notes, keeping the audience able to follow the new information.
How should the first pass work?
Read the example and limits before starting, keep a baseline, and work through the six drills above. Make two takes with a recording device you control and note the specific change privately. On playback, check that information remains intact before judging expressive choices. Stop if uncomfortable; no audio upload is needed.