Original practice card
Use one fixed example for a fair comparison.
Original puppet exchange: Pipp asks, “Is that my hat?” The partner replies, “Only if your hat can whistle.” Pipp listens silently, looks at the hat, then says, “Then I should teach it a song.” Film the exchange once with Pipp’s listening mouth still and once with accidental talking motion; compare readability.
How should the first pass work?
Read the example and limits before starting, keep a baseline, and work through the six drills above. Make two takes with a recording device you control and note the specific change privately. On playback, check that information remains intact before judging expressive choices. Stop if uncomfortable; no audio upload is needed.