Original practice card
Use one fixed example for a fair comparison.
Original four-line poem: “A cup waits on the sill / while rain redraws the street. / I leave the window open; / the room remembers heat.” First read by sentence punctuation. Then test a stronger break after “sill.” Record which connection changes, and preserve the exact wording in both versions.
How should the first pass work?
Read the example and limits before starting, keep a baseline, and work through the six drills above. Make two takes with a recording device you control and note the specific change privately. On playback, check that information remains intact before judging expressive choices. Stop if uncomfortable; no audio upload is needed.